A Journal of Tears 0/3

[jajeongsae]

Title: A Journal of Tears [Prologue]
Fandom: Super Junior/ K.R.Y
Pairings: KyuYeWook [K.R.Y]
Rating: NC-17
Warning: BoyxBoy, Angst, Implied Rape,
Author's Notes: Honeslty, I don't think this is original. Not in the least. LOL still I had the deep urge to want to write it. I had originally wanted to write this only about YeWook, but due to a recent

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[jajeongsae]

Spot! for Kikouri!

[jajeongsae]

LOL kikouri-chan is commenting on other peoples journal ins other people's journals....that made no sense I think .^^'

[jajeongsae]

I will, and Thank you. Same to you. :3

[evaa_x3]

holy Hades. (weird oxymoron O____O)

YeSung's seems scary here ):

This story's so dark, yet interesting ^^

Happy New Years~!

[jajeongsae]

LoL Everyone says yesung is scary x3 lol
Glad you think it's intresing. Keep a watch I'll write a new chapter soon.

Same to you. Thank you.

[hoyah]

um. sorry, just something i thought i should mention - if it's so dark that he can't see anything, how is he writing in his journal?

[jajeongsae]

ever tried to write in a journal in the dark before? Try to imagine the writing being off the lines and such. His journal has pen attached to by string so he can always write. It's hard to show things like this with typing. T^T and putting notes seems to ruin the mood at times.

[hoyah]

ah... i guess. idk, seems pointless to even try to write when it's so dark. ^^; but if that's the way ryeowook is...

a tip on how to make the bit about pen attached to book fit into your story. you could just have ryeowook mention how glad he is that his pen *is* attached to his journal, so he can write. because he sounds like he is pretty hardcore obsessed with writing in his journal.

[jajeongsae]

lol Okay. I'll work that in. *Scurries to fix* Thanks for the tips.

If he wasn't hardcore obsessed ...I wouldn't have a story. ^^'

[leunah23]

what's happening? i always thought yesung was kinda creepy..but here he was pretty scary!
please write more