Fic: On the Knees of My Heart (Jon/Daenerys, M)

[jal80]

Title: On the Knees of My Heart
Pairing: Jon/Daenerys
Fandom: ASoIaF
Rating:M
Notes: honey_wheeler wanted Jon  to do some banner calling on Daenerys, and while I'd intended it to be a short, sexy wee fic, these two freaks ended up having all these ~FEELS~ and it turned into this 4K+ monster of a FEELS FIC. *iinsert appropriate "I REGRET NOTHING" gif here*
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[honey_wheeler]

Okay, but no, seriously, this is effing perfect. I really just cannot. You made them so plausible and wonderful and hot, it's built so fucking perfectly, I cannot even tell you how much I love this.

kicking them aside and then standing on top of his insteps to get closer

ARGH STOP.

Again, the opportunity to deny him. To push him away.

ARRRRRRRGGGGHHHHH, STOPPPPPPPPPP. No regrets needed on this one, whoosh.

[jal80]

Hahaha, I INFECTED YOU wIth the FEELS.

Seriously though, thank you!! Both for your ARRRGGHS and for reading the first bit. Ugh, Jon and Dany. I DIDN'T WANT TO SHIP YOU AND YET.

Eff Kit and Emilia. Or let them eff each other at least.

[luna_plath]

I don't always capslock, but when I do, IT'S BECAUSE OF AMAZING THINGS JUST LIKE THIS. IN OTHER WORDS, PERFECTION

[jal80]

Aw, this comment makes my day! Thank you!! I'm PRETTY sure Dany/Jon will happen in canon (at least, it really seems to be leading that way), and I too get why not everyone digs it, but WHATEVS I JUST WANT THEM TO BE HAAAPPPPPPY. And have hot sex, obviously. :)

[midnightblack07]

WHAT IS THIS GLORIOUS THING YOU HAVE WRITTEN FOR THIS GLORIOUS PAIRING THAT DOES NOT HAVE NEARLY ENOUGH FIC FOR IT?!

DO I EVEN NEED TO TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS?!

Dany dreaming about Jon and being all wound up and frustrated was THE ACTUAL BEST, and Jon not wanting the throne for himself because he's JON, and JON BEING ONE OF THE ONLY MEN THAT DOESN'T OPENLY LUST FOR HER BECAUSE HE'S JOOOON <333

GUUH AND THE WHOLE "SWEAR FEALTY TO ME" BIT WAS JUST ABOUT THE SEXIEST THING EVER FOR REASON'S I CAN'T QUOTE ARTICULATE?!

Even now, he would leave if she told him to. In fact, she thinks perhaps there's a part of him expecting to be ordered out, no matter that she was just half naked and panting underneath his mouth. The thought fills her with so much tenderness that she finds she can't rise to her feet, not just yet. Not until she's kissed him and kissed him and unfastened the cloak from his shoulders. Not until he understands that she will never ask him to leave her. Not after tonight.

<3___<3 <--basically, what I

[jal80]

Whyyyyyy is there not more Dany/Jon? Is it because it seems like it MIGHT happen in canon and is therefore not as fun to fic? IDK.

But I DO know that I <3 you for this amazing comment!! Thanks so much, lovely!!

[mihnn]

This...is...AMAZING AND WONDERFUL AND BRILLIANT AND PERFECT AND...DID I SAY AMAZING????

I just want you to keep writing Jon-centric fics and never stop! You write him so sexily, that I'm insanely disappointed there's no Jon Snow lying on my bed right now.

This was heartfelt and lovely and sexy and deep all at the same time. I love the way you built on their relationship and how you integrated sex into the story.

Also...

"What is it that you would have me say?"

Jon on his knees, saying that???? BEST. LINE. EVER!

**I think I might have died**

[jal80]

Thank you!!! And as Jon is so my Fandom Bicycle, chances are I will just keep writing him having sexy times with various ladies over and over again. I cannot stop! Nor can he! ;)

[jal80]

I didn't really ship them either, and then, UGH KIT AND EMILIA AND THEIR FACES. So technically, the sorcery begins with them. Jerks.

And thank yooooouuuu!! This was a BEAST to write, so I'm so glad it worked!