Fic: UNN [Part Two]

[jamaica_tan]

Title: UNN

Comments

[ubermidget]

I'm so happy to see this again, it's hilarious!

[ichii_lemoncat]

This is really great! I can't wait to see more!

[tuulensisko]

Omg, I seriously love this so far. :D How do you even manage to make it sound so authentic, have you worked in a news station or something?

I just love how you manage to work everybody in and in pretty much the perfect roles for each of them. And all the hilarious details... I loved the article written about them and Feliks' tour. And all the characters in general.

About the French, though, "chérie" is feminine, you should rather use "chéri" for Arthur. And the sentences... I'm not a native French speaker, so I don't know for sure but to me they sounded really awkward. I'm not sure how to fix them, though...

Anyway, can't wait for more! ♥

[tuulensisko]

Oh yeah, they have a French beta-reading post at hetalia_fr for fics etc: here!

Just ask there, I'm sure they'll be glad to help.

[jamaica_tan]

Thanks! Just asked now, will put up edited version as soon as I get a reply

[jamaica_tan]

I've never worked in a newstation, I'm just an expert in BS. But Thanks for the compliment! I feel special :3

[katoritsubasa]

I love this, I am trying hard not to laugh on campus here. the guys playing pool are staring at me.

Really awesome.

[jamaica_tan]

Awww thanks, I never know if I'm being funny! I generally go by 'if it makes me laugh, it should be okay', because I can't show my work to anyone I know.

[tea_for_you]

I have to say that Francis probably could have picked a better place to have that conversation, but I have nothing to say except for that: the fic continues to be a delight, and I was so happy to see it updated.

[jamaica_tan]

Well that's Francis, all the tact of a nailgun