New Poem: And that's why the lady is a ***T

[james_is_sorry]

So here's a poem. Like most on lj it's in need of a redraft. I'm attempting a new schedule to my poems now, once a week a poem goes up on lj and once a week a poem will be redrafted and put on my wordpress. Thus one new poem and one broadly finished poem goes up on various blogs a week. In theory.

Feedback always appreciated if you have the time/

Comments

[yond_cassius]

I think it could help to make some reference to indigenous peoples/native americans in going through the list of America's failures/ the need to oppress others to reach the American dream. But I do really, really like this