Calling all readers...

[james_padfoot]

Hello peoples.

This is a worksafe entry of a fiction I decided to work on. It's a starting draft, and as far as starts go, I would like to know what you guys think. Criticism and any kind of constructive comments are welcome.

Basically I want to know, as a prelude, would you be interested to keep

Comments

[stardancer488]

I really love it, you really captured the audiences attention, and it flows quite well. Lovely job, i'd love to continue reading. :D

I want to know what happens *pokes*

[james_padfoot]

Amber-ness, thank you!

I wonder then, if I should do this in first form or third form... Whatchu think? Leave it as it is?

Anyway, thanks mucho mucho! I'll try my best to improve the quality ^^

weeeee

[anonymous]

Hiiiii
Great as usual ^_^ Sooo want to know what's happening *joins the poking* so go on. I think the way it is it's great, keep going. I can already see myself falling for his friend or maybe even josephina :P takes a lot for me to get fond of a blonde, but since you're the writer I'm sure he'll grow into me with no problem. *bows*

Nice way to end up my day at work ^^ keep going!

love,hugs and kisses

[anonymous]

gah, btw that one was me, Marce da bat...I just can't sign up on this comp.

Peace!

Awesomeness

[anonymous]

You are a fantastic writer. Keep on writing! ^__^ I wanna read more.
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