Awwww. This was a really sweet set of drabbles. I think your James was perfect. The last one was so sweet. Lily has him paint, and then off they go. Mothers intuition! Nice job.
!!! Your drabbles are actually 100 words exactly -- and I think this, more than the easy flow with your writing voice or your ability to take normal situations and make them so compellingly readable, showcases your skill with words.
In case you couldn't tell, I liked these very, very much. :D They're wonderfully sweet, but not too much so, and your James is characterised wonderfully. Number six has a special place in my heart. ♥
Oh, wow. That's fabulous. I especially loved section 6, because it made me get a little choked up - James never got to teach Harry to tie his shoes, or anything like that. You just gave the whole pre-Harry story so much more weight with these little details. Lovely.
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In case you couldn't tell, I liked these very, very much. :D They're wonderfully sweet, but not too much so, and your James is characterised wonderfully. Number six has a special place in my heart. ♥
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