Fic: The Little Priapus, James/Lily, R

[la_onza]

Title: The Little Priapus
Author: La Onza
Pairing: James/Lily
Rating: R
Challenge: 65. James & Lily's "first time"....and more. PWP.
Summary: Valentine's Day at Madam Puddifoot's gets a bit messy.
Warnings: sneaky public getting off.
Word Count: 1500

Comments

[kyasuriin]

this is a really amazing fic :) It's not often that we get to see things from Lily's POV and you write her so wonderfully and so intimately that it makes it easy to see what she sees in James and what he sees in her. Beautiful writing :)

[la_onza]

That's lovely of you, thank you. :)

[glassflower]

God, I adore this. The characterisation, the originality, everything - it's just perfect. Their irresistible attraction for each other, not only physically, is so clear and...undeniable, maybe. Adding to my memories :)

[la_onza]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked.

[amberlynne]

Oh, that's lovely. You really built the, um, anticipation nicely. And it's nice to see Lily appreciating James for his positive traits. Especially his laugh. I bet he had a wonderful laugh. Very nicely done!

[la_onza]

Thank you so much! Yeah, I like to think that Lily had things to learn from James, not just the other way around. And James surely knew how to laugh.