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May 15, 2005 21:35

circling, circular, egg-shaped, elliptical dome ( Read more... )

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andyignant May 17 2005, 10:48:22 UTC
nicely done. except the term "generation x" can kind of look like a poop stain in the middle of a poem to the reader who doesn't know how it ties in

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jammypac May 18 2005, 07:43:19 UTC
i dont know if thats a compliment or not but thanks! i wrote it when i was crazed

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