Comments | jamster74: A Second Chance Part 20

jamster74

A Second Chance Part 20

Oct 30, 2013 13:36

A/N: Thank you all for being so patient and waiting for this!

Jenny felt her heart pounding in her chest as she watched Emma saunter over to her with a mischievous, dazzling smile. Emma stopped mere millimeters from Jenny’s face. Jenny could feel Emma’s breath on her cheek. A warm feeling began to spread in the pit of Jenny’s stomach as she ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

partoetorno October 30 2013, 18:26:47 UTC

Oh you did the right thing jenny ! I am sure ! Emma must think about what happen but She loves you !!!

Thank u for Sharing another part of this wonderful story !!!!

By the way this is one of my fav parts
"“Emma!” Jenny protested as she watched Emma run away laughing. “You’re the only one I want to kiss” she murmured to herself before chasing after Emma. "

:)

And the kiss was wonderful !!!

lazerbug2006 October 30 2013, 18:31:18 UTC

Uh oh, I hope Emma can hear Jenny out....and that Jenny hasn't messed up! AWESOME job, can't wait for more :)

ptcruz October 30 2013, 18:35:35 UTC

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!! That was good!!! Of course Jenny would be a bit 'jealous' of Luzi at first, and of course Luzi knows Em well enough to know she has feelings for Jenny. Now....we just need, maybe, for Luzi to help Em realize it?? And for Jenny DEFINITELY not give up.

Great update!!!!!!!!!!

anonymous October 30 2013, 23:35:10 UTC

I love the way Luzi is trying to move the relationship along! So glad you're still writing Jamster!

mxc

anonymous October 30 2013, 23:51:48 UTC

Thank you for the new chapter. "No matter how much you try to deny it. I promise you, I won’t give up until you realize it”. Very good, Jenny! It's real you. A strong-hearted , persistent Jenny has appeared, instead of a uncertain, hesitant girl. Go, Jenny! Emma is being chased again. Dear authoress, make us happy as soon as possible.