It's not bad, seriously! I like it actually! Especially the 'past'part. The way you delivered it was not intimidating or whatever. It actually made sense in my head. It was BEAUTIFULLY written. =3
and I think you should raise the rating here to PG15. haha!
Crap! I'm so lazy when it comes to LJ recently... I haven't read this yet... don't worry I'll read all of your posted fic this saturday... ma fic marathon ko!!!!!!!!!!
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and I think you should raise the rating here to PG15. haha!
Don't you dare go Kei! >.<,
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hahahah......... I forgoT aboUt the rating But I've put Smut in the warNing. Next cHAp would be tomorrow.
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So it is Kota's daughter!!
Don't go Kei!! You would have to face it sooner or later.
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So wait for my comments...
I'm surprised to see nga chapter 6 na ni! grrrrr!
And step by step mo gale na post mo na?
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Hahahahahaah....... waLa pa ko kaStart Write sang Next cHap waLA ko GAna.
Kaw gd YAh GnawaiT ko gd ang Ky yama/oc mo XD
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