Negation Chapter 14

Jan 23, 2013 17:39

Hello.

I received an interesting message in my inbox today, and since I desperately need a work break, I decided to respond in full. Thank you, asmithereens, for the thoughtful request ( Read more... )

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amelialourdes January 24 2013, 00:17:35 UTC
I'm sorry this comment isn't related at all. I definitely plan on doing much rereading but my comment to you is... hello!

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jane2005 January 24 2013, 00:28:27 UTC
Yo!! Long time no see! I think this icon dates this journal terribly. Also, all of my icons are gone, and most of the old ones were on my now-defunct computers. Commenting on this LJ has me feeling weirdly sentimental.

How's it hanging?

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amelialourdes January 24 2013, 00:31:49 UTC
I knooowwwww. I was avoiding the PR spoilers but then I just didn't watch it anymore, wah wah. What?! What happened to the icons? Was this an LJ thing? Damn.

Things are good! Finally getting my organization done and it's feeling really, really good. How are things on your end?

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jane2005 January 24 2013, 01:35:44 UTC
ARGH!! I had a whole reply typed out and it was eaten! Dammit. Here's the short and sweet:

PR: Bad!

Icons: Eaten when my Jane2005 account reverted to free.

You: Good for you, and you are missed!

Me: Cold and busy!!

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mmmorpheusq January 24 2013, 02:08:36 UTC
Coincidentally, I just reread this fic a few weeks ago. (Yes, it is sad that I simply cannot let B/J GO.) Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed the version that I read, and after reading the new/original chapter, I think I prefer the one you substituted for this ( ... )

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jane2005 January 24 2013, 02:33:59 UTC
Well, if you're a loser, so am I, because I totally skim sex scenes. They really are fairly rote - read one, read 'em all, to a certain degree.

I reposted this not because it was more explicit and in-depth *cough*, - if it had been just the sex, I wouldn't have bothered. But the dynamics of Justin's request and the way it played out added something different to the development of the story that I had taken out with the first version, I think. TBH, I didn't read the edited version at all, haven't read it for a couple years. But I do remember why I replaced it, and since it was requested, I thought I'd repost the original and restore the original story line.

I always thought your sex scenes were perfect - not gratuitous but part of the story line and sensual without being too much.

I'm now on my second fic-fandom since I moved on from QAF, and the sex scenes? Seriously, read one, read them all, pretty much. Angels, werewolves, Wincest, it's all pretty much slot A into B.

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