drabble: the child's eye

[janeausten4ever]

Title: The Child's Eye
Author: janeausten4ever
Rating: G
Warnings: Erm, prose?  If that counts as a warning...
Spoilers: N/A
Character(s): Melody Pond
Word Count: ~250
A/N: Written for the who_contest prompt "Forbidden."  I imaged this as the colorful, chaotic mind of Melody as a child growing up on an alien planet.
Summary: Everything there will be beautiful.

Comments

[a_phoenixdragon]

Beautiful love...

*HUGS*

[janeausten4ever]

Thank you so much for reading, you beautiful human being!

[charlottetrips]

That was extremely chaotic, the thoughts seeming to not relate but upon closer inspection, they do. The way young Melody's mind works is much different than that of any other child which is as it should be, considering her background. It was beautiful, in its own way! :)

[janeausten4ever]

This was such a lovely comment to get. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

[lonewytch]

This is a thing of beauty.

I love more experimental fic, especially ones that cross the border between poetry/prose - there's isn't nearly enough of it - so i am always excited to see something like this, and even more happy when it delivers so gorgeously as this.

So many lovely lines in it, creating quite vivid images in my mind...LOVED IT.

[janeausten4ever]

Wow, thank you! It really means so much when people take the time to leave such thoughtful comments, don't you think?

I agree, I love to read people's out-there fic, like poetry and prose--it doesn't get nearly enough attention, I think, for how good it can be.

It means a lot that you liked this, as I really adore all your fic.