One-Shot

[janelle_chocher]

Title: Prettier Than the Stars
Genre: Fluff (?), Romance
Pairings: Taeyeon / Yuri
Rating: PG
Author's Note: Another fail shot from me LOL! Taengoo has been growing in me so mianhae for the future one-shots since surely, Taengoo will be there :P

With my hands tucked inside the pockets of my jacket, I walked and walked. The people passing by had their own

Comments

[eevanlvis]

Aigooo TaeRi!!! So cute!! I'm kinda liking this pairing because of you :)

[janelle_chocher]

LOL! Yep, TaeRi is cute :P Unnie! Thank you for reading ;)

[ao711]

you author make me happy <3
TaeRi just asdfgjkl;lkjhgfdsa so cute.
thank you :)

(p.s. you should totally add on to this with them "at home" of you know what I mean >:D)

[janelle_chocher]

oh gosh. You're such a byunnie! :)) I'll think about that 'home' :P Thank you for reading and commenting ^^,

[keyjah94]

Oh this was so sweet <3

[janelle_chocher]

Thank you for taking time to read and comment :) And gosh! I love your works :P Will be waiting for Darkness 4 :P ^^,

[keyjah94]

Honestly I love to re-read this~ Its just so sweet and makes me smile like an idiot xD
And I love all of your writing too btw~ Your drabbles = <3 there was a HyoTae one that made me feel so bad for Hyo ;_;
My writing isn't that great but thank you so much and I'm so glad you like it (:
Since my holidays start tomorrow I'll see if I can get part 4 up soon ^^ <3

[kaori9]

This TaeRi melts my heart. omo, what shall I do???? I love this pairing so much~~ You wrote well, short and sweet :)

[janelle_chocher]

I dont think I wrote very well in this one though but yeah, thank you for taking time to read and comment :) You should start shipping TaeRi :> :)) LOL! Annyeong~ :P

[kaori9]

I've been a LONG TIME TaeRi shipper--very resilient one too! I tend to ship underrated pairings ;)

It's the effort that counts. Hehe. Though, maybe you could place a tiny indication on who the narrator is to begin with. I guessed it was Yuri in the beginning and I was right when I read Taeyeon's description (nicely done btw, good hints) but for someone else, it could have been Taeyeon until that point. I know it's hard to put in traits that haven't already been used so much so that they've been run into the ground.

keep writing and annyeong! :D

[janelle_chocher]

oh god! That helped me a lot! :) Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. I'll improve a lot. Really! LOL! Yeah, i'll try to clear up the indications :) Annyeong~ (: