Comments | janie_aire: A Girl, Waiting

janie_aire

A Girl, Waiting

Sep 10, 2011 22:07

My first fic
Spoilers through The Girl Who Waited
Amy / Rory-bot

A Girl, Waiting

You have a stupid face. Yes, a stupid face. Rory, why is your face so stupid?

Why I am talking to a robot? Again?

I made his face. I put that face on his stupid face. It’s not his face. It’s my face. My stupid face.

Doctor, I can’t wait anymore. I can’t, I just ( Read more... )

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owlsie September 11 2011, 05:25:30 UTC

ow, my heart :( amazing first fic.

janie_aire September 11 2011, 12:53:36 UTC

thank you! i continue to amaze me. i never thought i'd do fic.

owlsie September 11 2011, 12:54:32 UTC

I never thought I'd write fic either! But this show takes over your brain.

janie_aire September 11 2011, 13:00:54 UTC

omg, the doctor is turning us into him.

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redjaywrites September 11 2011, 08:20:21 UTC

Very good first fic! I love the narrative.

janie_aire September 11 2011, 12:53:55 UTC

you're a doll, thank you!

promethia_tenk September 14 2011, 03:26:49 UTC

Oh, Amy. *heartbreak*

Excellent fic, period. Let alone a first fic. I hope you shall write more! The stream of consciousness feels so horribly lonely--isolated from the environment, even. Just her thoughts, echoing. And I love all the echos of earlier episodes. Definitely gives extra resonance to the episode.

Have you posted this around to any of the comms so more people can read it?

janie_aire September 14 2011, 04:45:17 UTC

Thanks!

What's a "comm"? Community? How do I post it around?

promethia_tenk September 14 2011, 05:22:46 UTC

Yup, a community--that's how most people find fic to read. eleven_fic would be a good place to post it (a general comm for all Eleven-era fic). You would have to join first, to be allowed to post, and should read over the community profile for some basic directions. If you poke around the comm, you'll see how most people do it: they write up a header for their fic with things like the title, the characters involved, warnings for spoilers or any content that might be offensive, perhaps a quick note or summary giving an idea of what the fic's about or anything you want to explain about it. And then under the header you make a link to this post on your journal (unfortunately on eleven_fic, the formatting doesn't make the links obvious--they're not underlined or anything--but if you hover your cursor over you'll see them ( ... )