Comments | janna_hawkins: Payback (5/5)

janna_hawkins

Payback (5/5)

Jul 08, 2009 14:45

Okay so I finally finished the story. Big thanks to ( Read more... )

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danaems July 9 2009, 02:50:06 UTC

Now this is more like him! Lol I still remember what I said about him in your first version of this chapter. :D A couple things I think are funny are his comments about Jackie, his "Quite right too", and Rose's reaction.

Poor poor Doctor! He's becoming domesticated! But for a good reason. ;)

janna_hawkins July 11 2009, 18:39:18 UTC

Thanks! Hmm you want me to post the other version for comparison? :P

Yep! :D

janine_moony July 9 2009, 07:55:49 UTC

Yeey! That's sweeeet! I love the Doctor's reaction XD
I would LOVE to know how it goes when they tell Jackie ;)

janna_hawkins July 11 2009, 18:40:31 UTC

Thank you! :D

Hmm well if you really want I can write one more chapter where they do ;)

janine_moony July 11 2009, 18:54:23 UTC

Ohhh, that'd be really great! You would be my hero =D

janna_hawkins July 11 2009, 19:07:24 UTC

Aw thanks!

So anything you really want to see in it? Tyler slaps perhaps? :D

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