Congratulations on making your first post as a fanfic writer. It is very nerve wracking to make that leap from private pleasure (in writing - no puns intended!) to publishing your ideas online, and I commend you for that. I have a few stories under my belt, so I can totally relate.
I find AU stories very intriguing, and would love to see you develop this idea. May I make a suggestion at this early stage? I did find the story a little hard to read, because it is written as one large piece. Perhaps someone could beta the chapter to help the presentation? Each speech, for instance, needs to be separated out for clarity. I hope that you take this advice in the positive spirit that is intended.
Good luck in continuing the story - it would be interesting to see how it continues.
first of thank you for reading it , yeah it was big leap of faith cause i wrote it just for my own amusement .. would love to have someone as beta .. & thank you for the suggestion .. i will take care of it ..
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I find AU stories very intriguing, and would love to see you develop this idea. May I make a suggestion at this early stage? I did find the story a little hard to read, because it is written as one large piece. Perhaps someone could beta the chapter to help the presentation? Each speech, for instance, needs to be separated out for clarity. I hope that you take this advice in the positive spirit that is intended.
Good luck in continuing the story - it would be interesting to see how it continues.
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