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[jaolianas]

The Book of Ruth

I thought this trip would change me. And it did, as all such journeys tend to do, but not in the way I expected.
I went to Ecuador to do God’s work. Not because my faith was strong - it wasn’t - but because I wanted it to be. In my church, belief flamed bright; only those I was told not to bother my head about lacked conviction. In

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[raven_wings_]

This is stunning and beautiful and too short.
It needs at least one more scene, if not two - i.e. I want to see the paint spill, and I want to see when she finds the phrase book. But, don't show us the finding of the boots, the offer of the skirts...
There were a few phrases I would lose, but I'll call you and talk about those.
Absolutely gorgeous.

[_wolfling_]

Thank you. I have other, more specific questions about this, so have it in front of you when you call?

And you're right, there's a scene or two missing.

[_beryl_]

please keep writing.

[_wolfling_]

I will.

I want to see you over break? Maybe?

[onlyme531]

When you're a famous writer, remember all the little people who did nothing to help you.

'Cause I am constantly in awe of how well you write.