Bingo: Promt, Noise "Never Too Late"

[japanesemiko]

Songfic written for inusongfics
Prompt: Noise
Song: Never Too Late by 3 Days Grace
Pairing: Miroku/Sango
Warnings: Mild cursing

Comments

[shadowsvixen]

o: Did you kill Sango?

[japanesemiko]

Ish open to interpretation

Luff luff luff!

[simple_jack1]

AHHHHHHH!
Amazing, I loved it!
I know I'm suppose to technically be at the store right now.... buuut, I had to wait for my idiot to make a burger... yeah. I read it, I loved it and I think it's probably going to be my favorite.
(Change the characters names... and then make a short story... sell it, get famous, get rich... and then promote my future dream book!)

hihi

[rebukes]

Not sure if I've ever spoken to you before, but I'm Vixi's wifey. :P She directed me to this and I have to say that I absolutely loved it.

You, as the narrator, resisted the fluff trap, instead depending on realism to tell your story. And it did. Very, very well. It was sad, though more interesting than depressing. (at least for me.) I found Sango's outlook extremely possible and convincing, especially her fighting against Miroku's "Everything will be okay!" attitude with her self pity.

And this:

And as the door to the apartment swung open and the cold trickle of fear slide up his spine once more he realized something that he had never thought about before.

Sometimes it was the silence that was the loudest noise of all.

Was absolutely gorgeous.

Re: hihi

[japanesemiko]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enojoyed this.

I tried very hard to keep it at least semi-realistic, and, considering fluff generally makes mevaguely uncomfortable, avoidig it was easier than I thought it would be..... Not to say I wasn't tempted, but I tend to be the one to sit there for hours thinking of all the ways that everyone else was expecting for things to go just so I cold do the opposite.

Once again, thank you very, very much for taking time out of your day to not only read it, but also to comment on it. This makes me super happy.