[ THE WEIGHT OF BOTH OF US / fanfiction/ NC-17 / sex, historical references, castration ]

[slash4femme]

Title: The Weight of Both of Us
Author: slash4femme
Fandom: Hetalia
Pairing/Category: Japan/China
Rating: NC-17
Warning: sex, historical references, castration
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, I do not make money off of doing this. The only thing I'm getting out of this is pure unadulterated creative enjoyment and less hours

Comments

oomph!

[xotsukiyume]

Like everyone else, I thought this was marvelously-written. Interesting take on their relationship, love how their dynamics come off as more balanced in this fic (with give/take happening to the two of them).

Hope to see more!

Re: oomph!

[slash4femme]

Thank you so much, I find that I like writing fics where these two actually have a little bit of a give and take. I'm glad you liked this.

Everything-gasm!

[gisette]

This is probably the most beautiful, breathless, philosophical, daring, give and take fanfic for these two I've ever read. It was so heartrending, yet delicate and...whispery, for a lack of better words. I loved how you kept them IC and gentle. Yao was dominant for a little bit (which grabbed by ChuNi fangirl instantly) and then proceeded to delve into my favorite archetype for these two: a relationship that seems to have found some peace with each other but they still don't forget and choose to remember when they copulate. Reading it at its climax is like a fleeting breath--both the reader and the characters don't want it to end.

The symbolism is especially well-chosen and it creates a new facet to their dignities by giving the reader something to weight upon. The subtleties, the graceful prose... Ah, I can't find the words to dewcribe how much you've seduced me with this fic...

wow

[slash4femme]

this is one of the most flattering comments on a fic, I have ever gotten. I am especially pleased because I love this fic, really enjoyed writing it and thought it came out well.

so thank you so much for your lovely comment.

Re: wow

[gisette]

Heh, I'm glad. Beautiful fanfiction shouldn't go unnoticed, that's for sure!

I really really hope you write more~!
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