This is the first of a series of more serious pieces, intended to flow together in a diary style. The reader is meant to feel a little obscured, so don't worry that you might have no idea who Miss Yet Again is, for example.
There are a few things I don't like about it. I feel the latter half needs work, and extention. I feel that my friend needs a name, although I have yet to find one for her. I'm worried that it changes style halfway through.
Those of you who know me should know by now that I adore intelligent criticism. Castigate away, dears. I think I can take it.
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There are a few things I don't like about it. I feel the latter half needs work, and extention. I feel that my friend needs a name, although I have yet to find one for her. I'm worried that it changes style halfway through.
Those of you who know me should know by now that I adore intelligent criticism. Castigate away, dears. I think I can take it.
L. Jaquelin Michael
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