Denial Ch 2

May 04, 2010 12:20



Dean trotted out of the police station, file in hand, and a victorious smirk on his face.

“Got ‘em, now,” he said to Adam as he dropped into the waiting Impala. “The traffic cams picked something up.”

The youngest Winchester took the folder when Dean held it out. Inside were photos taken by the cameras. They showed Sam leaving the motel in the ( Read more... )

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jared4ever May 5 2010, 00:05:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! It was fun to write! I decided to inflict some poetic justice on Shepard and Max!

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whatjuliewrites October 4 2010, 22:23:15 UTC
Wow, this was intense. I'm not sure why I love to read about Sam suffering, but God help me, I do! Loved Dean and Adam pulling off the rescue and getting revenge. And the ending was perfect. Hot, but even more sweet. It was just love and trust exemplified.

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jared4ever October 5 2010, 01:18:45 UTC
Me too! Sam suffering is...strangely intoxicating. :) Thanks!

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durtydeefla82 October 6 2010, 01:43:09 UTC
AAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW! LOVED!!!!!!!! That was... intense! Sheesh! Poor freaking SAM! And Adam, yeah, what a crash course in crazy for that kid! I didn't comment on the first part cuz I immediately had to continue reading, but I have to say, TY! Keep it comen? ROFL! Or not coming!

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jared4ever October 6 2010, 02:31:26 UTC
Thanks so much! I wish Adam had come back this season...or at least been mentioned!

I have a few other stories up, and a couple in the works. Hope to have them up, soon, too. :)

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beatlemaniac9 October 7 2010, 22:06:54 UTC
Damn! That was so friggin hot!!!

I am glad that Dean and Adam saved Sam. And nice twist with the icubus' mate.

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jared4ever October 7 2010, 23:25:24 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, I figured some poetic justice was just what this ending needed. :)

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phx69 October 8 2010, 04:44:47 UTC
I always liked this fic. I'm not a fan of Adam but I liked how he was portrayed. He wasn't a 'threat' to Sam's position as Dean's younger brother and I enjoyed seeing both Dean and Adam's protective side. Plus the poetic justice of Dean's revenge was perfect.

Awesome job.

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