[fic] Giving Full Attention - 1/1 - Donghae-centric

[jarringvacuity]

Title: Giving Full Attention
Chapter: 1/1
Author: jarringvacuity
Genre: AR
Warnings: Some disorder
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Donghae-centric, with Ryeowook, Eeteuk, Yesung, Heechul; Hankyung/Heechul
Synopsis: Lee Donghae, 24, is not quite the normal kid.
Comments: Careless writing, bad grammar, short, etc. I suck at coming up with titles.
Disclaimer: Purely fictional. I

Comments

[amethyst_realm]

Hi~~~ 8DDD *waves frenetically* Surprise~! I bet you didn't expect to see me commenting on a Suju fic XD;; [I guess times have changed. Or rather, I have changed...] I was in need of something different--or maybe something to convince me that you are the only 19 year old I know so far who has above average skills in writing--and this story delivered X3

[jarringvacuity]

HAI THAR! 8D *massively surprised* what's this about 19 y/o kids and their writing skills? i envy some 19 year olds, they have the gift of language; they can put whatever they wanna say exactly into beautiful vivid imagery, the kind that not only makes you understand but also hits you unexpectedly hard, the kind that i'd never even think of, even if i did, i'd be conscious about what strange things i'm making up and be too scared to put them in XD then again maybe i don't experience lots of things here. haha i was worried if after a long break it wouldn't sound like me anymore XD like apart from style, maybe my 'voice' has changed

[amethyst_realm]

Don't be too hard on yourself =3 Isn't it enough that you're my only 19 year old girl who isn't only capable of writing above averagely but can be my rant/rave buddy in regards to fanfiction? X3;; It's kind of a long story but to give a condensed version, I've been reading some fics that were supposedly written by 19 year old writers, which either makes me want to gouge my eyes out or make me look like this =| all throughout