Comments | jarysm: We Are Alive, a poem in Iambic Pentameter

jarysm

We Are Alive, a poem in Iambic Pentameter

Feb 19, 2009 22:27

We are Alive ( Read more... )

Comments 2

emerriffic February 20 2009, 07:09:26 UTC

I like the line "or is man made, inhumanity?"quite a bit.
Nice Job!

jarysm February 20 2009, 07:11:09 UTC

Thank you, I like that too, it kinda jumped out at me. I really enjoy juxtaposing words within lines. I did that a little in my nanopunk poem.
Glad to have a fan :D