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[jasminesense]

Then compressed voices end there laughing vaporized eyes. Behind my laugh; clouded with soft stinging cries, of places and people burned subtle, to a specific pattern of a day's desire. For, quick, blind time, billowing squares into what was over and found.  Everything taken! Left with love was burning inside. This place has evacuated outside into

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[anonymous]

what is that supposed to mean...blah, blah, blah, blah, blah

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[jasminesense]

Then compressed voices end there laughing vaporized eyes. (feeling as if you cant breath, my happiness was gone) Behind my laugh; clouded with soft stinging cries, of places and people burned subtle, to a specific pattern of a day's desire. (when you saw me happy it was covering up pain from people in my life who have hurt me, over and over) For, quick, blind time, billowing squares into what was over and found. (it is done, no more pain) Everything taken! Left with love was burning inside. This place has evacuated outside into sun kissed cheeks.(the pain is gone, and has been replaced with happiness)

I am sorry you dont understand what I write, but if you are going to comment, please leave your name. This poem is basically about pain I have experienced, pain I acknowledged and let go of. I hope you now understand it, I broke it down so you can get the jist of it.