Jasslous first fic

Nov 29, 2008 00:48



title

Ziggy

fandom 
The OC

timeline <
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post series final

beta

a/n 
Be patient it's my first attempt at fic. All
mistakes are mine!

a/n 
MY many thanks to my friend nullsys for
giving me the nudge of support and the courage to try my hand at my first
fic. Thanks you're the man!!

disclaimer I don't own Ryan but I did have a dog like Ziggy ( Read more... )

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fredsmith518 November 29 2008, 08:40:42 UTC
very much liked the description of the dog starting to run, then rummage across the park, really easy to picture

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Ziggy fredsmith518 November 29 2008, 14:29:18 UTC
Did you like the last line fred?.Hmmm I wonder who suggested that?.LOL

Thanks fred!

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jenskyies November 29 2008, 12:07:59 UTC
Ohh, post looks good and it's a very cute story. I love how the mutt is a sneaky little bastard, but still so loveable. Of course, Ryan loves him. I'm still extremely fond of how he wakes Ryan up, the bark alarm and the doggy breath, nose and furry paws on his pillow and the way he doesn't want to be left by Ryan and rushes after him (of course we all know he wouldn't do that to anyone) is adorable. Super cute! Now I'm waiting for more... :-)

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jenskyies November 29 2008, 14:35:20 UTC
Thanks jenskyies,for taking the time to read it.

I've a long way to go before I ever get fic writing up to parr but you have to crawl before you walk don't you? ..:=)

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bicky40 November 29 2008, 12:42:36 UTC
Loved this :))))))

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bicky40 November 29 2008, 14:36:59 UTC
Thanks Bren:=) hugs

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chrisear November 29 2008, 14:02:10 UTC
great story.... love Ziggy ... that is an interesting.... I love dog stories and Ryan getting a pet stories

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jassylou November 29 2008, 14:46:14 UTC
Just noticed I hadn't logged in.Duh!

Thanks for reading and pleased you like it,I thought it might be too babyish?.
I thought I'd start small and work my way up to more serious fic someday *sigh* hugs

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zbyszko November 29 2008, 15:33:19 UTC
Very cute- and now I miss my Rupert (he was a pug).

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jassylou November 30 2008, 14:59:34 UTC
It's said that dogs become to look like their owners. I think with Ziggy and Ryan it must be the "expressive" big eyes and the glare!!

I miss my spaniel bitch (Bella) but she wasn't quite as stubborn or wilful as Ziggy.Thank Heavens!!! LOL

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