Pretty good fic! Killing Angela was a nice spin. I enjoyed your look at Peter blaming himself--it makes me wonder if he *was* responsible (like with Arthur) or just being himself.
Are you going for Gabriel and Peter already in an established relationship? If so, are you going to end up expanding on that in future chapters?
Also, I'm guessing you'll be providing a flashback or at least a look into the past through dialogue to explain Angela's demise, yes? No need to answer, I'm eager to find out. :) So few fics explore Angela's death.
Thank You! Yes, in the fic Gabe & Peter are already together. The next one I'm currently writing is really how Angela died, the new villain (it was a minor character during season 3!) and somewhat on how the two guys got together =) A lot of writing ahead of me !
This is so sad. Poor Peter. His Ma might have done many bad things but I guess he loves his family so much. He still could forgive Nathan after what Nathan did..
Can't wait to see how this story goes, on the way reading ch 2 now. :D
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Peter would totally blame himself, even if it wasn't his fault.
Great characterization. I liked this a lot.
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Poor Peter! Poor Sylar!
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Are you going for Gabriel and Peter already in an established relationship? If so, are you going to end up expanding on that in future chapters?
Also, I'm guessing you'll be providing a flashback or at least a look into the past through dialogue to explain Angela's demise, yes? No need to answer, I'm eager to find out. :) So few fics explore Angela's death.
Great job!
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Can't wait to see how this story goes, on the way reading ch 2 now. :D
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