my paper heart will bleed

Nov 23, 2003 02:23

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xxshellzxx November 23 2003, 09:19:08 UTC
HAHA! great songs jay.

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jayb November 23 2003, 11:44:06 UTC
thanx. it'll sound better with music.

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tas85 November 23 2003, 15:49:15 UTC
enjoyed the lyrics very much, hope the songs turn out well!!!
TAS
ps as always good luck w/ "the one"
pss going to see love actually on tues, VERY excited glad to hear that it rox from someone!

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jayb November 23 2003, 16:00:35 UTC
oh dear god it was amazing. it shows almost every form of love. thanks for the support, if we ever make it out of ewing, we'll play those songs just for u. lol. have fun at the movies, dear god, im excited that people are seeing it. its taken over "youve got mail" as greatest romantic comedy ever.

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songs .. julieb November 23 2003, 16:59:16 UTC
puuurty good songs. altho somethin makes me feel like its too bubble gummish. the words are words anyone can simply make up without talent. good songs, but just not feelin it, man
sry
4 evr nd always,
jb

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Re: songs .. jayb November 23 2003, 18:27:13 UTC
lol, um julez, that makes no sense. u say that they are good songs, but then you say u dont like it? well anyway, thanks for the comment, sorry u dont like the songz.

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Re: songs .. silentkorean November 10 2004, 21:11:55 UTC
Lol what do you know about BUBBLE GUM LYRICS!!!??!!

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sandimasrules November 23 2003, 21:38:12 UTC
I think the first song could be really good with the right music. the second one is ok, but i think you tried to hard to rhyme the words and it detracts from the song. But that's just me.

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jayb November 24 2003, 03:24:02 UTC
thanks for the feedback

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songs.. julieb November 24 2003, 17:22:47 UTC
i def. agree with...(greg is it?)

but wut i mean is that, yeah.. the songs are "ok" but, i think they need work because that's not really u. i mean.. those words are britney spears words. u need to put more into it. i feel like there's no effort behind them. but that's just my opinion, and how i feel. how long DID it take u to write each?

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Re: songs.. jayb November 24 2003, 17:49:22 UTC
the let go song i finished rather quickly, 20-30 minutes. but out to sea took me forever, a good part of the morning. i wasnt tryin to go for a britney spears sound, so im sorry if it came across that way. trust me when i say that when u hear the music with it, u will see its far from a britney song.

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thedanman November 24 2003, 19:01:31 UTC
i think u may have some good songs, if u put music to them. i cant really relate to them unless i dont know the timing, or distinction. but dont let me hold u back. i never heard of love actually. maybe ill check it out sometime. or mayeb i wont. yeah i think i wont

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jayb November 25 2003, 04:08:24 UTC
go see it bro. its the best 6.50 you will spend this fall.

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