writing blues; help?

[jayeanne]

I think I need someone to take a quick look at something I’m writing. Anyone willing to beta for me? May or may not be a fanfic, but well the main character is based on Kazuya Kamenashi. *lol I KNOOOW!* I want the writing to be lighter and what-not but everything is just coming out…dark? HELP! Just need an extra pair of eyes and someone to toss

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[prettyorianna]

I'm off to bed right now but I do spend a lot of time at the computer so if you have yahoo messenger you can always talk to me there. It's the same as my LJ. prettyorianna@yahoo.com

Though I don't actually check that email. I use prettyorianna@aol.com But I don't usually check that, either, unless I am already expecting something.

So yeah, either email me at the aol one or hit me on yahoo!messenger and I don't mind listening and applying careful flattery and whatever else.

[jayeanne]

thanks!:) I really appreciate it. as I'm *supposedly* working now, I'll message you on ym later. I use the same UN on my YM, so yeah please don't be surprised when I suddenly pop out there. xD Thank you~ :D

[prettyorianna]

I got you (^_^) I missed you when you sent it but you've been added to my contact list, bringing the total to.... TWO whole people. I'm so popular (^_^)b

But yeah, you can message me any time and if I'm on the computer then that's good and if I'm not then I'll see you said hi and I'll drop you a line.