Proud Mum Alert

[jayne_perry]

My son brought home all his school stuff home as it is the end of the school year

Comments

[leesa_perrie]

That's a really good poem, especially for his age. Which son was it, older or younger? If it's younger than I'm even more impressed!

You could have a real talent on your hands here. That's better than a lot of crap that is published in magazines!

[jayne_perry]

It my eldest - 11 years old. From the looks of it, it has probably been hiding in his backpack for a while.

I love the last line especially.

[shansgrl]

Wow! That's really great for an 11 year old...I'm 35 and wouldn't be able to do that well.

I hope he continues to write, he is showing great promise.

[jayne_perry]

Thank you for your comment. I agree too.

[lysambre]

I'm very impressed with the imagery of this poem and would honestly not have thought it was written by such a young writer.

You should definitely encourage him to write more :).

[jayne_perry]

I would encourage him to write more, if I could drag him away from the playstation! His favourite games are car ones. You can tell by the racing car line :)

Poem

[barcardicider]

I have to agree with the other comments, this is excellent work from one so young. An imagination to be encourged.

Well done

[jayne_perry]

I thought it was excellent too. Thank you for commenting you've made me and my son very happy.

[jayne_perry]

So did I when I read it.

He's gone to bed now, i'll show him all your kind comments tomorrow :)