pointless RenIchi drabble

[jazz_trousers]

Title: Dance Lesson
Author: jazz_trousers 
Beta: NONE LOL
Pairings: RenIchi
Disclaimer: I don't own Bleach or any of its characters.
Rating: G
Warning: Language
Word count: 1252
Summary: Renji is trying to teach Ichigo how to dance (so he can take Tatsuki to the prom). Accompanying song: Little Bit by Lykke Li.

Comments

[ichibanseiken]

AH! What? They chickened out? Gahhhh.....

Very nicely written, BTW. Wonderful sense of tension throughout. And the "He's ridiculously clumsy" followed by "He' a quick learner", that was typical Renji!

[jazz_trousers]

This was originally going to be part of something much longer, but it died on me, so I thought I'd just publish it as is.

*pat pat* Don't worry. They had sex in the end.

Thanks~ ^_^

[only_dani]

as aslways, fantastic, and using Little Bit was sooo good in this!

Also, my favorite line by Ichigo: “Fuck you! I’m just here to learn, I didn’t come so you could eye-molest me!”

Even if Renji called him queer right before this, the comment still made me lol.

[jazz_trousers]

Isn't it just the loveliest song?

They're so mean to eachother, they can't handle the burgeoning love that wants to burst out of them~

[writerx75]

Oh, my...I liked the fact that it seems like Ichigo picked the song, to begin with...it makes me wonder what was going on in his head, especially since he seems so touchy through this whole little story.

I really liked the way you wrote the difference between Renji's inner thoughts and his dialog. I also like the way you wrote how they seem to draw closer only to get all fired up about it and attack each other. OK, and I was relieved to hear they do have sex in the end...because it seems like the two of them are going to explode if they don't. XD

[jazz_trousers]

Thanks very much!

Oh, the sex. It was sudden, violent and all over the place. d^_^b