Chapter 5 has landed!!

May 17, 2011 15:25

This chapter nearly killed me. I wanted to punch myself in the face about a hundred times while I wrote it.
I'll spare you my gushing and just remind you that this is co-written with 0_xrosax_0 , who deserves some kind of medal for putting up with my whining and all the amazing work she's done on this fic <3
Anyway, without further ado, here it is.

This Charming Man -5- Until We Bleed )

this charming man

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cptnsuz May 17 2011, 16:01:23 UTC
This chapter was very realistic and sweet. I like the gradual building up of their relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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jazz_trousers May 17 2011, 16:41:13 UTC
Thanks very much~
I am looking forward to writing it- rawr!

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ichibanseiken May 18 2011, 19:06:24 UTC
I like the "no rush" part. You are beautifully descriptive in some parts but it's fast and brusque at the same time. Like a dip in cold water.

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jazz_trousers May 18 2011, 21:01:09 UTC
Thank you!! That's what I was aiming for with this, I'm glad it worked ^_^

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sofeenalee May 22 2011, 02:55:56 UTC
Babe, you can jazz in my trousers anytime.

Just through all the chapters in one go. Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really in the mood for some hot angst right now hahaha.

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jazz_trousers May 22 2011, 12:06:34 UTC
LOL thanks!! One of my betas does affectionately just refer to me as "Jizz".

Next chapter is coming soon, I can feel the words in my fingers, ready to burst out.

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