"No sempai, don't touch me there!": AUTUMN

Nov 30, 2010 08:04

Author: jazz_trousers and 0_xrosax_0
Title: Autumn
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Hisagi/Kira
Warnings: Hot sex, roleplaying, uniforms, spanking, jizz everywhere. Happy days.
Summary: Izuru digs out his old Academy uniform. Co-written with the amazing 0_xrosax_0 who I cannot thank or credit enough. 50% of this fic is hers and I am so grateful for all her help <3

I can tell you taste like the sky, because you look like rain.... )

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only_dani December 1 2010, 01:47:30 UTC
hoo boy that was delicious, and the last line slayed me!

but seriously though, you both should be really proud of this, it was cute and funny and fuckin hot too. I love me some good Shu/Kira and I think I really needed that story. Good job, 5 stars :)

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jazz_trousers December 1 2010, 21:35:52 UTC
Awww thanks! *feels fuzzy and happy*

I love this pairing so much, you don't even know.

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tylashke December 1 2010, 07:51:09 UTC
That was hot and the ending was cute! You know, I can imagine Kira trying something even more kinky after using that Bakudo. XD Here's a smiling Shuuhei as a reward. =P

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jazz_trousers December 1 2010, 21:37:26 UTC
OMG that is a super-cute Shuhei icon *___*
Thanks for reading!!
(He totally would. He's freaky, deep down.)

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ceestar December 1 2010, 12:40:58 UTC
Aahhh, that had me blushing and giggling the whole way through~ Loooved it!

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jazz_trousers December 1 2010, 21:38:03 UTC
Thanks! Glad you liked.

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writerx75 December 1 2010, 19:49:54 UTC
I don't know if this is sad or not, but the thing I'm most excited to comment on about this piece is your tagline, because I didn't know you're a Morphine fan, too. Now I definitely think you're one of the coolest people in the world. :DDD

OK, this piece was just way too much fun overall...I really liked how much Kira got into the roleplaying; he was just way too cute in his student role, and it seemed like Shuhei appreciated it, as well. XD And the smexy times in this are just nosebleedingly volcanic...the oral sex and the fact that Kira was talking dirty to please Shuhei (so fucking hot and sweet), the kinks and, oh my, the fucking...it was all hot as hell, but the other thing I really liked about it is the way you wrote this couple, I really bought it...it seemed hot and sweet, as well as IC. Very nicely done to the both of you and thanks for posting this! I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the seasons... :D

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jazz_trousers December 1 2010, 21:56:34 UTC
One of the coolest people in the world!? ^__^ *puts on tiara and sash*
Morphine are the shit~, plus if you take that line out this fic totally has nothing to do with Autumn... xD
Thankyou so so much, that is really awesome to hear! Plus I totally agree with you that 0_xrosax_0 can channel Kira like no other.

Have some tissues for your bleeding nose and get ready for Summer. When I write it.

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