hey I know this is really old but I read the top entry or whatever and I thought it was pretty good. There were a few lines I think it could have done without but overall I thought it was a vivid picture of someone laying out in the woodland. Contemplating and feeling the oppression of her surroundings and using those to convey what her overall feelings were. What I wasn't fond of was when those feelings were explicity stated i.e. :"Life never turns out the way you think it will" or "She felt lost. Not knowing which path to choose, she considered her options" Anywho that's what I thought a good one though something worth looking over again from time to time.
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