Comments | jazziebhsluv09: Fic-One Foot In Front of the Other-Chapter Five

jazziebhsluv09

Fic-One Foot In Front of the Other-Chapter Five

Jun 21, 2007 22:02

Title: One Foot In Front of the Other
Disclaimer: Okay, so Sam and Dean aren't mine, don't make me sad.
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: past Sam/Dean
Summary: Sam left, but he had his reasons.

Thanks to my beta,
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sam/dean, one foot in front of the other, mpreg

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kamikaze_redux June 23 2007, 02:46:18 UTC

I agree. I'd be pissed as hell.

kamikaze_redux June 23 2007, 02:45:27 UTC

OMFG! I need more. I need it now. I am on the edge. Oh man, oh man.

anonymous June 23 2007, 20:17:34 UTC

Poor Dean fining Sammy like that with another man in his house and then fininding out he has a son he never knew about:(

jazziebhsluv09 June 27 2007, 20:15:48 UTC

I know right!
I guess he has a right to be a tad pissed!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

anonymous June 27 2007, 17:50:48 UTC

I don't know why you were worried. This chapter was very well written... Based on the few times I have been able to catch the show, it seems that Dean would be just that hot headed and assuming before knowing all the facts. I just hope that the two of them can work it out now that Dean knows the truth. Please update soon...

jazziebhsluv09 June 27 2007, 20:17:33 UTC

Thanks so much!
I was so nervous!
Abd there will probably be more awkwardness and anger before they can manage to work things out.
Thanks so much for reviewing!

loves fanfic_addict04 June 28 2007, 07:10:52 UTC

Omg! I *loved* this entry. I didn't realize it was up until a few days later, but you know, whatever.

I like dennis too, for all you dennis-haters. I think it's nice that Sam has someone to help him. He's too anti-social for his own good...well even though he does have a son to take care of.

I agree though, if he would've just told Dean, then that would've made some things easier I think.
I can understand why he would've thought Dean might just settle down for his sake, but still.

Also, loved the response Dean gave, so real.

Need more soon!

-Fanfic_addict04-

Re: loves jazziebhsluv09 June 30 2007, 16:14:38 UTC

Thanks!
I'm so glad there are a few people who actually do like Dennis!
And! Last night I stayed up super late and wrote chapter six and sent it off to be beta-ed so, most likely within the next few it should be up!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! it really means alot!