How's my Driving?

[jazzingitup]

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[anonymous]

From what I've seen of Jazz, there are some things that are confusing me. Granted he didn't get much time in the movie, but what we did see of him was basically the exact same as what was in the G-1 series. Jazz was cocky, borderline confrontational, excitable, totally fearless, and not really one for thinking things through. His speech patterns were very distinct--he used slang and ebonics in pretty much every line.

My biggest point of confusion would be the speech patterns. It just...doesn't actually sound like him, you know? I can hear that cockiness and playfulness, but I feel like it could definitely be turned waaaay way up without any fear of overdoing it. Your version also seems extremely calm and analytical in comparison, almost scientific, which is not something I would ever use to describe him, and I guess I'm just wondering where that's coming from.

Basically, I like the character that you have, and he's certainly interesting to watch, but...I can't actually seem to find any Jazz in him.

[jazzingitup]

Thank you very much for giving me some much needed crit

[anonymous]

Your characterization reminds me a little more of Prowl than Jazz... Maybe a combo of Prowl and Bluestreak.

[jazzingitup]

First off, thank you very much for the crit, which I have been wanting