Ruben Part II

Sep 23, 2004 11:12

In case you need a refresher, here is a link to Ruben Part I and I certainly hope you read it if you haven't already ( Read more... )

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thanks jazzspazz September 23 2004, 10:38:06 UTC
As always, high compliments are well received. I am not sure whether writing this is cathardic at all. I just had it in my head. And there is more. I hope it wasn't too long and boring. And that some of the emotion reaches others. Thanks again. True sentiment is rare.

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btw jazzspazz September 23 2004, 11:15:45 UTC
how can, or can't, you relate?

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Well jazzspazz September 23 2004, 10:42:17 UTC
Yes there is a part III, IV and V. I have yet to write them, and most will probably be shorter than that.

I could barely handle seeing such a body, but especially if it was someone close. I don't know why. These things happen, our corporeal forms are just that, corporeal, and the forms change. Is the person inside changed by it? I don't believe that way. Whatever happens, after death, the body is no longer sacred, it is no longer the temple of the soul. Or so I would like to think... the alternative makes me shudder, one of the few things that I am truly afaid of. I would be dead and still feel what is happening to me.

And, as for what happened to Ruben, I would not be very effective at getting people to actually read what I write, if I divulge the 'plot' and 'details' in such a manner.

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Re: Well jazzspazz September 23 2004, 11:13:58 UTC
Thanks, I do too. They are, as weird as it sounds, fun to write. This is information that has been in my head for a month or two now. I guess I am just beginning to unravel my feelings about it.

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somebody's listening to this anonymous September 30 2004, 19:25:41 UTC
the password: OPE. it's about fluoridation.

me: http://profiles.myspace.com/users/2540891

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Re: somebody's listening to this jazzspazz October 4 2004, 08:12:01 UTC
On the contrary, Mandrake, I enjoy the company of women, but I do deny them my essence.

and just out of curiosity, how did you get to me?

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