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[jbh88]

okay so basically im not doing good in english. i should've see nthat coming the essays ive done were complete crap but im not a good writer so what do you want me to do im not a person that can think of a beautiful way to explain something thats just not me idk i just hope we get more work and more essays so i can bring my average up. i hate

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[xx_acidrainbows]

Aww. *hug* It's also the beginning of the year, everybody does badly at the beginning of the year because they're just not used to getting into the school groove yet. And if you weren't a good writer, I doubt you would have even made it into AP. :) Everybody just has their own personal style, its not really a matter of who's better than who and stuff. Trust me, just work at it, and I bet it'll come out better than you expect. That's what happens with a lot of my writings. I get ideas and stories that are complete shit but I kind of have to convince myself that it has the potential to be good and that I just need to kind of work my ass off until I get a migraine to get it as good as I see fit. You definitely have that potential too, I just don't think you see it yet.

[jbh88]

aw your like a little buddha but yeah idk i really dont see anyway to get better like just how i think isnt as like fancy as she'd like i guess. its just like the fact i dont feel strongly or have a connection to any thing shes telling us to write and its just not my cup of tea i guess lol

[xx_acidrainbows]

rofl, Buddha?! D: Am I big and fat and naked? Nuuu. >.<

And yeah, I know what you mean. Writing isn't everybody's cup of tea, like you put it lol. She's really... controlling, though, Hartman. Like, I like her and everything, she's a cool teacher, but when she marks up our essays I feel like she's trying to change our writing style. I know that she's a teacher and what she suggests is probably for the best, but its kind of... I feel sort of violated in a way, like she's trying to change how I write in order to fit her standards.

[jbh88]

yeah i know idk im a formula essay writer im not that good at it. i need to find my voice because it definately looks like anyone could've written my essays but like i know what you mean idk its just odd lol i dont like it