we're all just stupid clichés anyways

Jun 16, 2011 22:04

we're all just stupid clichés anyways
2,200 words | jongkey
Social-outcast Key meets football-captain Jonghyun in a music room. (Or alternately, an exercise in predictability.) As requested by artificiallilac

The room becomes a place where boys who were not born equals can create as equals. )

shinee, !fanfic, jongkey

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kantamu June 17 2011, 03:20:14 UTC
Ahhh I liked this!

I sadfaced a little when Key changed it to a solo, but definitely smiled when Jjong made it in time. Thank you for sharing~

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melalocket June 17 2011, 03:37:09 UTC
i really love this!!
khekekekee~

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artificiallilac June 17 2011, 05:50:26 UTC
;______; Omg, I loved it!!! Even if for a moment you scared me there!

It's was beautiful none the less! I loved the characterization because I can totally see Jonghyun like that and Kibum too. I appreciated that Kibum didn't like, breakdown or anything huge like that, instead he fixed the song to fit one person and then of course Jonghyun comes in and a;dlkfajgfga.

Thank you so much!!! <3

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ziggymok June 17 2011, 06:41:01 UTC

this was lovely and realistic

characterization is perfect too, i loved the snarkyness and awkwardness and everything

fantastic job

<3

and i spot the Shakespeare and Dante reference there, nice touch, i loled

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scarredknees June 17 2011, 12:07:28 UTC
aw, this was absolutely adorable, i loved the realistic side of it.
thanks for sharing! ♥

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