The Emotional Education of Edward Cullen - Chapter 3

[jcaddict]

Previous Chapters: 1, 2.
Author: Picklewinkle (ff.net)/JCAddict (LJ)
Characters/Pairing: Edward & Bella
Rating: M
Category: Drama/Angst/Romance
Spoilers: None
Summary: Edward Cullen is brilliant and complicated but also closed off and socially inept. Can Bella teach him how to tap into and understand his emotions through an unorthodox experiment

Comments

[jcaddict]

I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying the story! I like Edward this way too. Admittedly, I pretty much like him any way ;) Yeah, there is a block between him and his emotions for sure! Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I loved reading them!

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It made me realize that she was a force to be reckoned with when she put her mind to something
For some reason I really loved this sentence. Maybe because it reminded me of me :p /full of myself

I wanted her to stick it to Mike as much as she wanted to.
This made me snort!

Also, this:
"I don't follow you."

"You don't need to."

"I'd like to…if you'd give me half a chance."

"I could say the same to you."

LOVING the dialogue :D

[jcaddict]

One of my betas suggested that I use more 'he said/she said' tags but I really like the way the dialogue works. Plus I think I depend too much on those tags to show the characters emotions. I want their words to show their emotions...or I work for that. I'm glad you approve!

You ARE a force to be reckoned with. I should know. I reckon with you all the time ;)

I love that you're reading this!

Nice icon. He took my breath away to be quite honest!

[elsexwhere]

There are times that 'he said/she said' are fine but in this case the dialogue is better WITHOUT them because they would stall the obvious fast exchange of lines.

I am reading and I m enjoying and I m waiting for the next installment!

It's a shot from when he looks at me, about to say "I do" *cough*