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Jack/Daniel Comment Fic Porn Tree

Jun 13, 2007 14:25

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Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 28 2007, 15:01:19 UTC

'Ware "Unending" AU, but still spoilers. Continue at own risk.

It was mere chance that Jack was in the corridore outside Daniel's quarters when his archeologist opened the door to see Vala in front of itm barely wearing a black satin teddy and brandishing a pair of fluffy pink handcuffs. Daniel stopped short mere inches from her and then took a step back, but not before Vala reached out and stroked a hand down his arm with a suggestive smile.

Jack saw red. Who said she could touch [Daniel]? Jack stalked forward and placed himself menacingly at Daniel's side. "He said 'no'," he growled at her. Without waiting for her to speak, he grabbed Daniel's arm and dragged him back into Daniel's quarters, slamming and locking the door ( ... )

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] advection June 28 2007, 16:47:18 UTC

My favorite bits of this, outside of the entire yummy description of frottage, are the dialogue: "Unless you want me to stop, talking later," Jack ground out and "Sorry, haven't got a clue what I'm doing here," he murmured against Daniel's lips, and the other man laughed. "Trust me, you're doing just--uh...fine," Daniel said and Daniel's very last line, which is such a nice twist on his line in the original episode.

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 28 2007, 20:55:07 UTC

Yay! Sometimes just writing whatever comes to mind works!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] sidlj June 28 2007, 18:09:39 UTC

Go away, Vala. Try Cam. Yeah, he really needs a distraction. Shoo!

*hums appreciatively and eyes the red spot on Daniel's neck longingly*

Very nice. :-)

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 28 2007, 20:55:23 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] theemdash June 28 2007, 18:50:31 UTC

First, that is my prompt.

Second, you totally did what I was thinking of when I wrote the prompt.

Third, I love you.

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 28 2007, 20:56:01 UTC

First, why does that not surprise me.

Second, don't you know that I read minds?

Third, yay!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] zats_clear July 15 2007, 15:34:02 UTC

*hive mind*

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk July 15 2007, 17:43:18 UTC

Hee.

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] secondalto June 28 2007, 18:59:29 UTC

*points to icon*

That pretty much says it all.

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 28 2007, 20:56:32 UTC

*revives* Dying bad. No more dying kthx.

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] msbeata June 29 2007, 06:20:29 UTC

I like this unending!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk June 29 2007, 10:55:51 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] starglyph July 7 2007, 03:31:25 UTC

It was a fifteen second decision to damn the consequences

Yay for Unending fixes!

Re: Alternate [Unending AU, Spoilers] melayneseahawk July 7 2007, 16:08:56 UTC

Woot! Unending would have made so much more sense if Jack had been there (and if there had been no Daniel/Vala...)

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