twilight fic: everything in it's place (edward/bella, edward & emmett)

[jd_lit]

Title: everything in its place
Author: jadeddiva
Rating: M for implied sexual situations
Warnings: none, really
Word Count: 3370
Summary: Emmett Cullen is not a man of many words but what he says always matters. Edward Cullen learns a lot about life, love, and women from his older brother Emmett.
Author’s Note: All of this belongs to Stephenie Meyer. I’

Comments

[riveroad]

Absolutely fabulous.

Too often I find that characterizations of Emmett are like caricatures but you've struck a perfect balance between what we do know and everything we don't. I love the interaction between Emmett and Edward - it's the best part of both brothers and friends.

I also really like the little mentions of how alone Edward was before Bella. It's sad without being pathetic and I LOVE that.

Outside of the little details that I love (Alice coming to apologize for putting him out, though she doesn't know why was such a great touch), the style and flow of this is fabulous. I really can't say enough good things! I love love love.

[jadeddiva]

Thank you so much :) I'm glad you thought I got Emmett's characterization right - I was worried! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[prettyprofound]

I usually don't read people's fan-fiction's, but I have to say. I loved yours.

[jadeddiva]

Well thank you then :)

[bombshell_chic]

That as so very awesome! I've read some funny Emmett stuff, but the connection between the brothers, and the way Emmett understands Edward's angst balanced out the humour just perfectly.

And I cannot tell you how hard I laughed at Emmett with the marriage license! Nicely done!

[jadeddiva]

I'm glad you enjoyed Emmett - I blame the set photos for the fic, and for the license part. Thank you very much for the review :)

[my_maverick]

Oh man, I ♥ this. You get Edward and Emmett's characters so right and it's all so nice and wistful and well-paced.

I like how you've managed to get such insight into Edward's character without being overly ansgty.

Plus, lines like this:

He’s almost tempted to leave, to head to Denali and let Tanya have her wicked way with him just to avoid being on his own.

and

"Let’s get you to your bride so you can finally get some,” Emmett says.

just kill me with their awesome-ness. Thanks so much for sharing this!

[jadeddiva]

Thank you very much for reading :)

[thalia_csiny]

An exceptionally well-done fic. I love how you wrote Emmett. The books haven't brought out his personality yet (for me at least, I haven't read Eclipse yet) so your fic is truly very revealing. Great insight to Edward's character as well.

A small spelling and grammar mistake but other than that, it's perfect.

Hilarious, as well.

[i]He’s taken to outrageous displays of supposed religious power, trying to exorcise demons from Alice (with her help, and some pea soup) and blessing his bed (Rosalie was barely amused). [/i]

^^My favorite.

Well done, you! :)

[jadeddiva]

Thanks for reading :) I'm glad the pea soup went over well, because really, if anyone would be the pranksters in that family, it would be Alice and Emmett :)