~holy shit~ finally something new

[jdubbs911]

Our lips touch
time stops

Fingers clasped
an eternity

Deep in your eyes
shades of blue

Wonderment overcomes
disbelief within a dream

Exploring
skin so soft

Nibbles of the neck
chills

a whisper
I love you

Comments

[theocfreak78]

i REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY like this one.

it's so true.
and it was written so perfectly.

i really actually felt the moment as i was reading it.
i'm impressed.

[illusionofnight]

That is beautiful ... amazing!
'sall I can say, good work!