Prompt 8: You've Been Friday'd! (please go have your eyes examined) - Team AU

[games_referee]

Title: Ordinary
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nakanishi as friends, one-sided Akame
Summary: Ordinary Fridays could turn out to be so hectic yet soothing sometimes…
Prompt: You’ve been Friday’d! (please go have your eyes examined)
Warnings: none.
Notes: I guess when I signed to write this prompt I first wanted to produce something similar to the image it

Comments

[still_ciircee]

(I will come back and vote when the poll is working.)

The descriptions in this story--the place, the feelings, the people, the weather--are all so rich and vivid! It gives this fic a sort of luxurious feeling. And the world building here was really good, too. I really like how the friendships here are so natural and fun. I think my favorite thing, really, is how this doesn't go into 'shipping (deeply, that is) but that friendship is the focus here.

[crazy_otaku911]

There were parts of this I really really loved. There are parts about that just get so gorgeous and rich. I love some of the imagery and . *w* ♥

One thing I will point out is that the dialogue is really hard to follow with how you used -- instead of "". I think there's even a part where you don't close the dialogue and with how you use -'s in the actual narrative, it made the fic slightly headachey. Just something to keep in mind. I did like it, all the same, but it was a much harder thing to concentrate on.