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Gift Fic for lilly0

Oct 17, 2015 14:11

A piece of Senpai love for lilly0

Title: Maybe
Pairing/Group: Kimura/Goro (SMAP)
Rating/Warnings: Hard R for non-graphic descriptions of sex
Summary: Little puzzle pieces of intimacy between the number one host and his client lead to one big, final picture.
Notes: In which Kimura is a host and &G decides to take a chance. This was written in one long ( Read more... )

r: r, p: inagaki goro/kimura takuya

Comments 7

lilly0 October 17 2015, 12:37:49 UTC

Grabbing my spot!! :D
WOW! THIS STORY WAS JUST AWESOME! Dear author-san, I will come back tomorrow and give this story a comment it deserves!!!!! Just wanted to tell you for now how much I liked it! <3
Except my proper flailing tomorrow :D

lilly0 October 19 2015, 09:37:23 UTC

Okay, here I am, finally, with my comment :D

First of all, Anon-san, I really really loved that story. The host prompt, yays!!!!!! And the pairing fits surprisingly well. I also loved how there was this red thread with them going for some love interaction and all these glimpses into how they met in between.

It was written in an amazing way and I was so engulfed in the whole story and the characters. All the little things we notice through Goro's eyes about Kimura, how he moves, talks and reacts and how he pushes several of Goro's buttons. The look in his eyes (I love Takuya's eyes :D) The teasing and Takuya's little S-side :D

Takuya as a host is just askjfjsdafklsadlfksd HOT! And the way you described him, omg, it seemed to be so real. I could basically picture it right in front of me!

And I love how you caught his character of being all charming and alluring and a little smug even to all laidback and to embarrassed suddenly, like here:
“Are you seriously gonna...” Goro opens his eyes and he watches Kimura wince and bury his ( ... )

kurokouchi October 25 2015, 16:02:28 UTC

I reveal myself! :D ( ... )

ladyxenax October 17 2015, 18:20:50 UTC

Wow! That was awesome!

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kurokouchi October 25 2015, 16:03:32 UTC

What do you mean I'm a sucker for true love :|

I am :|

No such thing :||||||||||

yoru_no_hikaru October 22 2015, 21:02:18 UTC

I've never read this pairing before. Your recipient recommended this to me, though, so I came to read.

Well... it's breathaking. Really. This is such a wonderful, lovely, gripping story. You got me from the first line and had me going through the entire thing. Your imagery is strong and fitting, setting a heavy, but hopeful atmosphere. At the same time the sex is just the right kind of dirty without getting obscene.

Thank you for thinking this up, it's really a wonderful story, one that I will absolutely take inspiration from.

kurokouchi October 25 2015, 16:10:21 UTC

Whoa! And I've never written this pairing before--or SMAP, for that matter! Receiving a comment like this is an intensely amazing thing to me, holy gosh.

Descriptions/imagery are the WORST for me; English is my second language so I'm always worrying I can't set the... mood right? Or describe things right? So I'm happy that my points got to be conveyed all the same to you! Writing sex is always so difficult for me--it's always too much or too little--so thank God I got to find some kinda balance, apparently. Haha!

Good luck with your writing! I've never been an inspiration before, but it sure makes my heart swell. I'm sure you'll do great!!