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g_esquared August 13 2011, 02:56:48 UTC
eeeep this was so fun and loltastic. ryo is such a zoo misanthrope and he TOTALLY FALLS FOR IT and sho omg shoalways trying to help. i am beyond amused.

YOUR OTHER PANTS, YOUR HEAD PANTS. THIS DESERVES TO BE QUOTED FOREVER.

aiba and yoko shenanigans homg thank you for letting me enjoy intergroup (which i admit i sort of never read) it was thoroughly hilarious and the ending is just inappropriate and sneaky and A++++++++ because I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING.

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chainsawpants August 13 2011, 10:15:08 UTC
This was fantastic!

Tbh there wasn't a scene that I didn't positively enjoy♥♥♥ This whole fic is full of excellence.

Holy hell, I loved Sho in this, random wannabe hero tour guide ahaha and then the part with Taguchi and Koki with Koki being all angry and badass then suddenly yelling "Buttons! Not again!!"
oh man and then that kangaroo hallucination! Aiba's phobia was so freaking hilarious.

GUHHHH I could go on highlighting every single aspect of this fic! Intergroup broship is just plain fantastic, I love this exchange. I can't wait to find out who you are ;_; this fic was golden
Anon, you got this fic down, I hope greatfountain enjoys it as much as I did♥♥♥

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r_1_ss_a August 13 2011, 20:22:15 UTC
This was hilarious! I enjoyed it so much! I adore your sense of humor! <3

THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE ZOO AU IN THE WORLD! :)

Aiba and Yoko are awesome partners in crime. Sho, awwww, Sho. Nagase was HILARIOUS. And everyone else was perfect!

Thank you for sharing this with us!

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amhrancas August 14 2011, 01:26:39 UTC
Oh god, your Yoko and Aiba!! SO. PERFECT. XD;; Actually, no, your everyone. Seriously, this is cracking me up so much I'm crying. XDD;;

Peeking out over the right shoulder was a ferocious red panda decapitating a man; truly, he risked life and limb taking fruit into their cages every day.

OH GOD *wheezing* I think I'm dying XDDDD

Ryo glared at both of them. "Matiti."

Yoko grabbed Aiba's shirt and squeezed, trying to keep a straight face - only to end up cackling anyway.

"You've both been out in the sun too long."

"Say it one more time," Yoko asked.

*SNOOOOORT* Matiti and uume are, hands down, the greatest names to ever be given in the history of zoos. XD

I would cite back more and more, but I know that I would only end up repeating the bulk of your text. The kangaroo, the cabybara, Pan-chan-- all of it is so perfectly written for the situation. Seriously though, this is absolutely brilliant. Thank you so much for sharing this!!

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greatfountain August 14 2011, 03:00:46 UTC
OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS FLAWLESS PIECE OF PERFECTION WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS

OMG ZOO FIC!!!!!! AIBA AND YOKO ZOO FIC!!!!!!

aiba has a cheat sheet sdkjffdkngfldgk nagase and mabo are monsters kdsjfkdf yoko isn't allowed to do anything oh my god anon ;A;)♥ yoko is so whiny lmao it's perfect lD

and then! and then. koki&junno running the carnivores and stealing their go-cart and buttons the coatimundi and koki's tattoos (the line about the red panda tattoo i cannot oh my god)

KANGAROOOOOOOOOOOS and ryo and the "worst service ever" and matiti i had to google it to be totally sure but. lmao. yoko. yoko. he has just the right ratio of douche to normal person eeeee♥

"Right? That's probably what it is - some guest saw Yasu and Hina walk out of Primates and reported two escaped monkeys." I CACKLED ALOUD OH MY GOD

poor maru having to deal with yoko getting into the animal pools

Maru nodded, starting to unbutton his shirt too in obedience. TEARS ON MY FACE OH MARUthe massu lines. i can't. odkjgkfdjgkljfd. nakamaru. massu. i just. yeah ( ... )

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this is a useless comment greatfountain August 24 2011, 13:58:34 UTC
TEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY I LOVE YOU ;_______;

DFKOGJFKDGJKLDFJGK♥

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Re: this is a useless comment greatfountain August 25 2011, 02:39:35 UTC
Ahaha I just. Really like commenting I guess~ I'm just... I'm still floored by how fantastic this all was. the plotting, the characterization, everything. It is flawless and I am once again all blubbery over your writing ;______;

Well, if my giftfic must serve a practical purpose, I'm glad that's what it did. :l;;;; ♥

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