OH MY GOD POST-APOCALYPTIC AU, THIS IS SERIOUSLY ONE OF MY FAVORITE THINGS EVER AND I'M NOT EVEN PAST THE HEADER INFORMATION ajsdfjadsjfksdksd ♥ omg omg omg
oh god even just their LINES at the beginning, about how there used to be more water and it could be poison, everything about this just sets this amazing tone, I'm so in love right now ♥♥
they'd take a twice convicted Sky Pirate AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH JIN IS A SKY PIRATE OMG OMG OMG THIS MENTAL IMAGE IS THE GREATEST THING EVER I CAN'T EVEN *____________*
There hadn't been ships across the skies for at least a century. Sand Pirates was more like it. Ugh, guh, and then there is this, this constant reinforcement of what used to be versus what is, and how they live in this beautifully crafted world that hinges on "how it was" jasdfjkdsjfksja
'Eighth, you missed this one,' he said, pointing to his belt. Jin could see seven silver stars and one white symbol that Jin couldn't read. Of course, only priests knew how to read.And DYSTOPIAN SOCIETY COMES IN MY GOD THIS IS EVERYTHING THAT I LOVE
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I'm extremely glad that you like this kind of AU and that I managed to hit the right tone. I also really appreciate a long comment, yay!
I was really scared I had fucked up with Jin and Pi. I mean, that relationship is the core of the fic after all.
I wanted a larger role for Jaejoong but it turns out I know nothing about him. XD
I'm relieved you didn't hate the ending. I do have plans, but it was too much for the time frame, if that makes sense? I'd end up with a summary rather than a story.
Wow I really, REALLY wish this was a full-blown, multichaptered fic! I love this AU and the character portrayals! This was really well-written and I thoroughly enjoyed every bit of it! Great work Anon! XD
I really like this universe and all the peeks into what the past had been like, Jin and Pi's shared childhood, and despite being a "criminal", Jin is still a loyal and devoted friend fighting the system.
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oh god even just their LINES at the beginning, about how there used to be more water and it could be poison, everything about this just sets this amazing tone, I'm so in love right now ♥♥
they'd take a twice convicted Sky Pirate
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH JIN IS A SKY PIRATE OMG OMG OMG THIS MENTAL IMAGE IS THE GREATEST THING EVER I CAN'T EVEN *____________*
There hadn't been ships across the skies for at least a century. Sand Pirates was more like it.
Ugh, guh, and then there is this, this constant reinforcement of what used to be versus what is, and how they live in this beautifully crafted world that hinges on "how it was" jasdfjkdsjfksja
'Eighth, you missed this one,' he said, pointing to his belt. Jin could see seven silver stars and one white symbol that Jin couldn't read. Of course, only priests knew how to read.And DYSTOPIAN SOCIETY COMES IN MY GOD THIS IS EVERYTHING THAT I LOVE ( ... )
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I was really scared I had fucked up with Jin and Pi. I mean, that relationship is the core of the fic after all.
I wanted a larger role for Jaejoong but it turns out I know nothing about him. XD
I'm relieved you didn't hate the ending. I do have plans, but it was too much for the time frame, if that makes sense? I'd end up with a summary rather than a story.
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