I really enjoyed this; loved the concept and loved the way you stuck with Ryo's point of view as it developed. I didn't see the end coming (and may have imitated Ryo as i was drinking a coke at the time!), and I really enjoyed the other touches, like Jin not being an asshat, the collection of people at Massu's party, the running back and forth, and the present for Massu. This was really a joy to read, it was funny and snarky and kind of sweet, a lot like Ryo I think. I really enjoyed it, and I shall now cuddle it firmly and proclaim it to be mine!
"I'm going to Jin's with Taguchi," Yoko pipes up, smiling all smug; they all know he's going to blather on about how cool he feels all night. Ryo's not sure if he, subsequently, wants to be around that for any length longer than five minutes.
sdfkjdkgjkdfgj. my feelings.
ANYWAY. I love your Ryo voice. The narration and phrasing and characterization is flawless and I can't. I can't. Ryo is that perfect mix of life is hard and ridiculous and snarky and just. He'd never hear the end of it from Koyama for breaking their beloved Massu's spirit. CRYING.
All in all, it makes Ryo want to gouge his eyes out -- it's perfect. ♥
and then subaru being suspicious of ryo's "plans" and they always fail and dogjdfkgjfdjgkdf
NAKAMARU♥ tegoshi being a shithead and laughing at ryo's expense ♥♥♥
In the midst of Ryo's tirade to Pi in his mind, Tegoshi takes the present for Massu, sets it aside and presses a beer into his hand. Ryo can appreciate this. He looks around again and this time, Nagase is mandhandling Massu
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OMG, Joce, this is amazing!! (I can use your name, reveals are up 8|)
I'm so sorry that I didn't have the chance to read this earlier, but seriously, I love everything that is this fic. Ryo being so very Ryo and at the same time still being concerned about more of the details and emotions than people like to give him credit for, Drunk!Tacchon, Punny Subaru, Ambiguous Pi, NAGASE, just-- everything.
And oh my heart, the MassuPi. XDDDDD <3 This really is brilliant, thank you so much for writing this!!
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"I'm going to Jin's with Taguchi," Yoko pipes up, smiling all smug; they all know he's going to blather on about how cool he feels all night. Ryo's not sure if he, subsequently, wants to be around that for any length longer than five minutes.
sdfkjdkgjkdfgj. my feelings.
ANYWAY. I love your Ryo voice. The narration and phrasing and characterization is flawless and I can't. I can't. Ryo is that perfect mix of life is hard and ridiculous and snarky and just. He'd never hear the end of it from Koyama for breaking their beloved Massu's spirit. CRYING.
All in all, it makes Ryo want to gouge his eyes out -- it's perfect. ♥
and then subaru being suspicious of ryo's "plans" and they always fail and dogjdfkgjfdjgkdf
NAKAMARU♥ tegoshi being a shithead and laughing at ryo's expense ♥♥♥
In the midst of Ryo's tirade to Pi in his mind, Tegoshi takes the present for Massu, sets it aside and presses a beer into his hand. Ryo can appreciate this. He looks around again and this time, Nagase is mandhandling Massu ( ... )
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ALSO, TEE-HEE, "ASTRAL PROJECTION" and OMG OMG OMG MASSUPI SURPRISE <3 <3 <3 MY ENDLESS LOVE TO YOU.
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I'm so sorry that I didn't have the chance to read this earlier, but seriously, I love everything that is this fic. Ryo being so very Ryo and at the same time still being concerned about more of the details and emotions than people like to give him credit for, Drunk!Tacchon, Punny Subaru, Ambiguous Pi, NAGASE, just-- everything.
And oh my heart, the MassuPi. XDDDDD <3 This really is brilliant, thank you so much for writing this!!
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