Comments | jeannies_diary: stay sober

jeannies_diary

stay sober

Feb 21, 2004 16:51

i just sat on the flat hard-wood edge of the bed. Without a shirt, the cold air really went at my body. The bottoms of my feet were nearly stinging from the icy floor boards, but I was too busy watching the hairs on my arm stand on end then lay flat again as the air flowed over me. I wished I had a magnifying glass on hand, just to watch the ( Read more... )

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jeannies_diary February 21 2004, 14:46:37 UTC

it was just something i wrote. if you wish to leave any thoughts, be my guest.

anonymous February 21 2004, 15:58:30 UTC

i think you should keep your fucking mouth shut/ get a head start, start writing mcdonalds commercials. hows that for suggestion, hows that for prose. cunt.

Re: anonymous February 23 2004, 21:30:49 UTC

What an intellectual giant you must be. Mcdonald's, how appropriate, simple food, for a simple mind. With your linguistic skills, I'm sure you will become most familiar with the phrase "would you like fries with that" Despite what dumb-ass said, I enjoyed the passage.

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motion_victim February 25 2004, 06:32:42 UTC

well that was rude.

its anyones deal who enjoys it.

did i phrase that wrong?

jeannies_diary February 21 2004, 15:27:59 UTC

yeah, i didn't even really read it over I just wrote it out and that was that.