I'd Rather Be With You Part 5/?

Apr 18, 2009 22:36

Title: I'd Rather Be With You
Part: 5/?
Pairing: David / Brooke
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: I own nothing...really. This never happened!
Summary: David shows Brooke a very, very good time but says something that neither one of them expected.

As David continued his fabulous assault on her body, Brooke’s pert breasts bounced in time with his thrusts, sending ( Read more... )

david cook, brooke white, fan fiction

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dcgray April 19 2009, 05:01:09 UTC
Excellent! “You’re going to come for me aren’t you?” He asked huskily. Uh oh, nap time again!! lol

PS re the tags, this is how to do them:

fanfic, author: jeanos53, pairing: david cook/brooke white; rating: nc-17

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jeanos53 April 19 2009, 12:09:08 UTC
Thank you so much! I guess I thought I was doing the tags right. I was putting them in the section at the bottom. next time I will do it right. Thank you!

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cherrymaryberry April 19 2009, 05:08:07 UTC
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*FALLS OVER IN FAINT*

My God that was sssoooooo GOOD!!! That was fantastic!!!

but uh-huh David said the L-word...what's going to happen now??

Can't wait for the next part!!

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jeanos53 April 19 2009, 12:10:30 UTC
Get up silly girl! lol I am so happy you like it. I will have the next part up later today!

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