This. It's God awfully pink and couldn't we PLEASE have more than 10 'fics per page? That's a lot of tags to scroll past every time in case I missed something on a previous page.
Your plot is confusing, your characters are OOC and you need to thoroughly think of the story's flow. you story flow is everywhere and most of the time I'm confused. And sometimes the whole story just made no sense. You need a beta real bad too.
No offense but first paragraph of your story and I stopped. Its just that I'm too desperate for some Nishikato that I forced myself to read your story.
I'm not trying to offend you..i just want to critcize you of your writing to make you better.I'm sorry if I hurt you because I really dont intend to.
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(side note: LOL my captcha is graced to.)
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Is there a certain type of fic anon is looking for in particular?
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No offense but first paragraph of your story and I stopped. Its just that I'm too desperate for some Nishikato that I forced myself to read your story.
I'm not trying to offend you..i just want to critcize you of your writing to make you better.I'm sorry if I hurt you because I really dont intend to.
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